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Garely Elizondo

World Geography

November 4, 2011

Period 6 a/b

Living in Slums

Homes made of mud, with very limited room and crowded is what its like to live in a slum. It is very small and cause many problems. No space, Human waste, trash found everywhere are just some things you will find in a slum, you can also find children everywhere because there parents can not afford for school, and no toys to play with. Living in a slum can be extremely dangerous but sad for many people because, there is human waste found everywhere, rivers carry sewage and chemicals causing pollution, and kids not having toys to play with or schools to attend.

Human waste in a slum can be found everywhere, outside, inside, in the streets, and near the rivers. Sanitation in a slum is nearly absent, visitors who go to visit slums call them “flying toilets” because they are found everywhere you look. When Sanitation is nearly absent it can be very dangerous. “ Human waste leaches into the water people drink and contaminates the food they eat.” This sentence is a quotation from a text by the author Fink (Fink 2).According to an article by Sheri Fink, those people who are drinking that water are drinking water and bathing with water that has there own waste. This quote is trying to say that not only is there waste found everywhere but it is also found in the water they drink. Another problem found in slums is rivers carrying chemicals and sewage causing pollution.

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Another problems that is found in slums is rivers carrying sewage and chemicals that cause pollution. This can cause problems because those people are drinking and taking showers with water that has sewage and chemicals that can cause many pollution problems because those chemicals and sewage can cause many diseases . “Rivers not only carry sewage but also farming chemicals from estates outside the slum, it is littered with refuse, too: plastic bags, glass bottles.” This sentence is a quotation from a text by the author Fink. (Fink 1). According to an article by Sheri Fink rivers carry many things and those people cannot make a difference. This quote is trying to say that the river carries many things and none of them are making a good thing to help them out. Children not having schools to attend or toys to play with is also a problem found in a slum.

Many Children have to stay at home all day because they do not have any schools to attend or any money to go and buy toys. They also cannot learn anything from there parents because there parents probably did not go to school. The children have to stay at home all day because they do not have anything to do or entertain themselves with. “They make toys out of simple objects: A string audiotape tied with a stick. A plastic hanger passed back and forth through a wooden gate.” This sentence is a quotation from the author Fink. (Fink 4). According to an article by Sheri Fink children do not have enough money to buy toys so they have to make there own toys out of simple objects. This quote is trying to say that those children can dream of playing with toys but they now that cannot be because they do not have enough money to buy one, the reason why they have to entertain themselves with simple objects is because they cannot attend school or play with real toys.

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In conclusion, having human waste everywhere, sewage and chemicals running through rivers, and no schools to attend or toys to play with are just some problems you can find in a Slum. A small home made of mud is what a slum is and even though it is very small it can cause many problems. Living in a slum is very dangerous but sad for many people, there is human waste found everywhere,

rivers carrying sewage and chemicals and children having no schools to attend or schools to play with. All these things are some problems that living in a slum can cause. Many people would love to live somewhere else, and actually have the opportunity in this life to make our world a better place but with people not caring they will never have the chance.

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Works Cited

Blythe, Nils. “Mumbai's slum life poses world problems.” BBC News Online. 29 Sept 2011.

<http://news.bbc.co.uk/>.

Eaves, Elisabeth. “Two Billion Slum Dwellers.” 6 Nov. 2006. 29 Sept. 2011. <http://forbes.com/>.

Fink, Sheri. “Cities of the Poor I: Life in the Slums (Kenya).” Public Radio International: The World.

29 Sept. 2011. <http://www.theworld.org/>.

“Urbanization.” World Geography: Understanding a Changing World. 29 Sept. 2011.

<http://worldgeography.abc-clio.com/.

Rough Draft

    Homes made of mud, with very limited room and homes very crowded is what it is like to live in a slum. It is very small and cause many problems. No space, Human waste, trash found everywhere are just some problems you will find in a slum, you can also find children everywhere because there parents cannot afford or school, and because, there is human waste found everywhere. rivers carry sewage and chemicals causing pollution, and kids having no toys or schools to attend.

   Human waste is found almost everywehre you  look, inside homes, outside, and on the streets. Sanitation systems are nearly absent in a slum. The water that is used to drink and there for food is being contaminated and is causing many diseases because resources to make a diffrence. "Human waste leaches into the water people drink and contaminates the food they eat." People who live in slums are drinking water that has there waste which can become a problem because, that water is contaminated and can cause many diseases. his quote is trying to say that, not only is it found everywhere but it comes out where they drink from as well. Another problem that can be found in slums are rivers carrying sewage and chemicals.

    Rivers carrying sewage and chemicals are also problems found in slums. Chemicals and sewage running through rivers is a problem because many people use the rivers to shower and drink from that water. Many people that live in slums have gotten diseases because they are drinking from the water that is being contaminated by sewage and farming chemicals that are dangerous. "Rivers carries not just sewage, but also chemicals dangerous and cause some sort of problem when it comes to people living in slums health. This quote is trying to say that not just sewage does a river carry but chemicals that farmers use that can cause many problems. Children not having any schools to attend or toys to play with is a problem you have when you live in slum.

   Many children have to stay home all day because they do not have the money to attend any schols to attend, or stores to shop for a toy. This can be a problem because when they grow up they will not learn anything and they not able to learn anything because there parents probably did not have the money to buy toys to entertain themselves with anything else. "They make toys out of simple objects: A string of audiotape tied to a stick. A plastic hanger passed back and forth through a wooden gate." This quote is trying to say that even the children have to find the way to make the days pass by faster and more fun because they cannot go buy toys.

   Having to drink water with human waste and no schools to attend are some problems you will find in a slum. Homes made of mud, are what a slum is, it is very small and cause many problems. Living in a slum can be extremly dangerous but sad for many people because, there is human waste found everywhere, riveres carrying sewage and chemicals causing pollution, kids do not have toys to play with or schools to attend. Human waste, sewage and chemicals running through rivers, and children having no toys to play with love to live somehwere else, and have the oppurunity in this life to make the world a better place, but with people not caring they will never have the chance.

Introduction Paragraph

Introduction Paragraph:

       Homes made of mud, with very limited room and crowded is what its like to live in a slum. It is very small and cause many problems. No space, Human waste, trash found everywhere are just some things you will find in a slum, you can also find children everywhere because there parents can not afford for school, and no toys to play with. Living in a slum can be extremly dangerous but sad for many people because, there is human waste found everywhere, rivers carry sewage and chemicals causing pollution, and kids not having toys to play with or schools to attend.

Outline & Thesis Statement

Thesis Statement: Living in a slum can be extremly dangerous but sad for many people because, there is human waste found everywhere, rivers carry sewage and chemicals causing pollution, kids do not have toys to play with or schools to attend.

Outline:

   I.   Many humans do not have a problem living in slums because they have being living there for a real long time and so has there relatives, and they are now used to living in such a crowded space.

     A. Homes made of mud, are what a slum is, it is very small and can cause many problems.

     B. No space, human waste, trash found everywhere are just some things you will find in a slum, also...

     C. Living in a slum can be extremly dangerous but sad for many people because...

     D. Human waste is one of the biggest problems of living in a slum because...

 II. Human waste is found almost everywhere you look, insides homes, outside, and in the streets...

     A. Sanitation systems are nearly absent in a slum...

     B. "Flying Toilets" are what people call them not only visitors but those who live there as well.

          i. "Human waste leaches into the water people drink and contaminates the food they eat."
          ii. People who live in slums are drinking water that has there waste which can become a problem because...

       C. This quote is trying to say that, not only is it foud verywhere but it comes out where they drink water from.

       D. Another problem that can be found in a slum is rivers carrying sewage and chemicals...

    III. Rivers carrying sewage and chemicals are also problems found in slums.

          A. Chemicals and sewage running through rivers is a problems because many people use the rivers to shower and...

          B. Many people that live in slums have gotten diaseases because they are drinking from that water...

           i. "river carries not just sewage, but also chemicals from farming estates..."

           ii. rivers carry chemicals that farmers use which can be dangerous and cause some sort of problem when t come to there health...

          C. This quote is trying to say that not just sewage does a river carry but chemicals that farmers use that can cause many problems...

          D. Children not having any Schools to attend or toys to play with is a problem you have for living in a slum.

          IV. Many children have to stay home all day because they don'y have the money to attend any schools or go to a store a buy a toy...

         A. This can be a problem because when they grow up they will not learn anything and they are not able to lear anyting at home because there parents probably did not attend school as well....

        B. Children will not having anything to do all day because they do not have the money to buy toys to play with or entertain themselves with anything else.

        C. "They make toys out of simple objectst: A string of audiotape tied to a stick..."

        D. Human waste found everywhere, rivers carrying sewage and chemicals, and children have no toys to play with or schools to attend to schools are problems of living in a slum.

       V. Having to drink water with human waste and no schools to attend are some problems that you will find in a slum...

       A. Homes made of mud, are what a slum is, it is very small and can cause many problems.

      B. Living in a slum can be extremly dangerous but sad for many people because, there is human waste found everywhere, rivers carry sewage and chemicals causing pollution, kids do not have toys to play with or schools to attend.

      C. Human waste, sewage and chemicals running through rivers, and children having no toys to play with or school to attend are some problems that you have for living in a very crowded are named a slum.

    D. Many of the people that live in slums would love to live somewhere else, and actually have an oppurtunity in this life to make our world a better place but with people not caring they will never have the chance.